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Lauren V Acquaviva's avatar

“We are living in a poem but I need to get it right.“

Relatable, and well said.

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Lauren V Acquaviva's avatar

PS: The way you write about your wife reminds me of bits of Adrienne Rich’s “Twenty-One Love Poems.” Poem III (all of it) or the first nine lines of poem XII especially in this particular post. Check her out if you haven’t

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Mark Thompson's avatar

Yeahhhhhh...

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Tom Ciorciari's avatar

Steam of consciousness suits you well. Chicken Smoke, indeed.

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