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Mar 18, 2022Liked by Serge Bielanko

Loved this. The poetic imagery the moment, it all soared. If you haven’t gone there already—but of course you already have in songs—but there are short stories in you trying to find their way to the surface. Probably a novel or two. Each week, your writing gets stronger.

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Thank you so much, Taryn.

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Mar 18, 2022Liked by Serge Bielanko

Once again the sheer poetry of your writing astounds. I find myself happily surprised week after week. Not by your ability, which is glaringly obvious, but by the unexpected turns of a phrase that are immediately familiar. You see things that the rest of us tend to miss, though once pointed out, make us/me go, “Shit, yes! Yes!!! How did I not see that?!” You find the right words. Always. The right words.

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Thank you so much, Tom. I’m really glad you dig reading my stuff. Means the world to me to hear you say such nice things. Thank you for the support. Have a great weekend.

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Mar 18, 2022Liked by Serge Bielanko

What a beautiful moment you 2 had......

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You’re absolutely right, Jay. Thank you so much for reading. Hope all is well with you, my friend.

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Mar 18, 2022Liked by Serge Bielanko

It's life man...good & not as good days, but I am doing well, thanks. I just wanna get a little closer to what normal was. Play gigs, go to shows, etc. without drama! Ramroddin'!

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