Well, it’s Saturday night. The last hours of our beach vacation have drifted away from us. Ragged and sun-whipped, I pick myself up from my chair on the screen porch overlooking the street and move towards the sliding glass door.
Aug 11, 2023Liked by Serge Bielanko, Arle Bielanko
I love a good love story. And I love that feeling of holding the person you love the most in the world and dancing the the kitchen/on the porch/ in the rain. Thanks for a sweet way to start my Friday. Off to find some peaches.
Aug 12, 2023Liked by Serge Bielanko, Arle Bielanko
I experienced innocent young love on those same shores back when I was a teen. Used to spend nearly every teenaged summer up in OCMD. There’s something really special about those beach nights and those waves have witnessed some beautiful things, I think. Beautiful writing - you both are so lucky to have one another and we’re all lucky to have you share it with us. ♥️♥️
Aug 11, 2023·edited Aug 11, 2023Liked by Serge Bielanko, Arle Bielanko
Maybe it’s all the salty ocean water that got into your veins (trust me, it has that kind of magic & it’s why I live where I do), but this is one of your finest. Love song, love poem, love letter all in one. Perfection.
I love a good love story. And I love that feeling of holding the person you love the most in the world and dancing the the kitchen/on the porch/ in the rain. Thanks for a sweet way to start my Friday. Off to find some peaches.
August, beaches, screen doors, vacation's end, summer darkness. This was a good one.
I experienced innocent young love on those same shores back when I was a teen. Used to spend nearly every teenaged summer up in OCMD. There’s something really special about those beach nights and those waves have witnessed some beautiful things, I think. Beautiful writing - you both are so lucky to have one another and we’re all lucky to have you share it with us. ♥️♥️
Maybe it’s all the salty ocean water that got into your veins (trust me, it has that kind of magic & it’s why I live where I do), but this is one of your finest. Love song, love poem, love letter all in one. Perfection.
As fine a description of what it feels like to be in love as I’ve ever read. Kudos, brother. Truly beautiful.
Absolutely beautiful. I wish I could write like that.
I feel like I just read a great work of literature. This is brilliant.